一段文字譯做英文..

After seeing this article, I find that the various pollution in Hong Kong is really very serious, and the improvement work cannot be delayed anymore ! Hence we really need to do better in improving Hong Kong ’s environment !

After reading this article, I detected original Hong Kong each kind of
pollution extremely is really serious! But improves the work really is
engraves slow ! Therefore we really must well the best
improvement work!

看完這篇文章,我發覺到原來香港的各種污染真的十分嚴重!而改善工作實在是刻不客緩!所以我們真的要好好盡行改善工作!
請快快幫手,多謝!!= After reading this article,
I discovered that the pollution problems in Hong Kong is very serious
The environemental improving work must progress immediately
Therefore, we really need to start and carry out the environmental improvement work
Please help immediately, Thank you very much!!

看完這篇文章,我發覺到原來香港的各種污染真的十分嚴重!而改善工作實在是刻不客緩!所以我們真的要好好盡行改善工作!
After reading this article, I found that there are all kinds of pollution which is a severe situation that we should improve it with our best without hesitation.

看完這篇文章
After reading this article,
,我發覺到原來香港的各種污染真的十分嚴重!
I found that the original Hong Kong's pollution is very serious!
而改善工作實在是刻不客緩!
Work to improve customer is not carved relief!
所以我們真的要好好盡行改善工作!
Therefore, we really have to do to improve the good work!

看完這篇文章,
After reading this article,
我發覺到原來香港的各種污染真的十分嚴重!
I discovered that the pollution problems in Hong Kong is very serious
而改善工作實在是刻不客緩!
The environemental improving work must progress immediately
所以我們真的要好好盡行改善工作!
Therefore, we really need to start and carry out the environmental improvement work
請快快幫手,多謝!!
Please help immediately, Thank you very much

After I sew this essay, I know that the pollutions which are in Hong Kong is very serious. We should solve those poblems as soon as posible.

2008-08-02 15:01:49 補充：
After I sew this essay, I know that the pollutions which are in Hong Kong are very serious. We should solve those poblems as soon as posible.

From article, the improvement in Hong Kong environment is necessary since the horrible pollution.