有冇人可以幫我作篇英文作文

I give you a sample.

In the morning, I will bring Maggie to a Hong Kong restaurant(I don't really
know the English of HK荼餐廳) and tell her that XXXX and XXXX is Hong
Kong's own foods. Next, I take her to the 'Long Ping360' (Sorry, I don't
know the spelling) and show her the buddha and the cable cars. After that, we dine at a western restaurant and explain to her that in Hong Kong she can find many kinds of foods. In the afternoon, we go to Ocean Park/Disneyland/.....('...' means except from Ocean Park/Disneyland, you can write other places)
and give her some entertainment. At night, we eat at a Chinese Restaurant.

**I tried my best to reduce the number of words.

2008-07-28 18:27:19 補充：
In the morning, I will bring Maggie to a Hong Kong restaurant and tell her that XXXX and XXXX is Hong Kong's own foods. Next, I take her to the 'Long Ping360' and show her the big buddha and the cable cars.

2008-07-28 18:27:34 補充：
Then, we cross the Lantau Island by ferry because in this way she can learn more about ferries. After that, we go to a nearby western restaurant and dine in it. Besides, I explain to her that in Hong Kong she can find many kinds of foods, not just Hong Kong's.

2008-07-28 18:27:38 補充：
In the afternoon, we go to OceanPark/Disneyland and give her some entertainment. At night, we drive out to the Victoria Harbour to show her the beautiful night scenery. Finally, we eat at a Chinese Restaurant and let her see the difference between Hong Kong's foods and Chinese foods.

2008-07-28 18:33:25 補充：
P.S. Ngong Ping360, not Long Ping360
Hong Kong style restaurant, not Hong Kong restaurant