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Hong Kong is a cosmopolitan city located in Southern China. I take pride in being a Hong Kong Citizen and choose to live here rather than any other cities.

My favourite place in Hong Kong is the Ocean Park, the best theme park in Hong Kong. The Ocean Park is opened in 1977, and it is one of the most iconic places in Hong Kong. Several million people visited this theme park each year, many of them attracted by the great features it offers, such as the thrill rides and the aquarium, which is among the largest and most unique in all of Southeast Asia.

There are many thrill rides in the Ocean Park that I enjoyed, including the roller coaster, free falls, pirate ship and etc. My favourite ride is the roller coaster. As I am riding on the train looping through the guide rails at high speed, it is really tests my courage and offers me great excitement

Other than those thrill rides, I also like the tower which allows me to watch the landscape from far away.

Ocean Park also has marine features, such as the ocean theatre, the shark aquarium and the sea jelly spectacular. Recently, a new attraction called the Chinese sturgeons was added to the aquarium. It is a good change to see these newcomers which are one of the most valuable fishes in the world added to the attraction at the Ocean Park.

2008-07-24 02:43:38 補充：
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Ocean Park also has many marine features, such as ......
...... It is a good change to see these newcomers which are some of the most valuable fishes in the world added to the attractions at the Ocean Park.