can i rewrite the sentence as...

2008-07-24 9:13 am
War crimes fugitive Radovan Karadzic has been arrested near Belgrade posing as a doctor of alternative medicine, sporting long hair, a beard and glasses to hide his face.

hi, i saw the above sentence in a newspaper, can I rewrite the above sentence as the following 3 sentences?


War crimes fugitive Radovan Karadzic, has been arrested near Belgrade, posing as a doctor of alternative medicine, sporting long hair, a beard and glasses to hide his face.

War crimes fugitive Radovan Karadzic, which has been arrested near Belgrade, posing as a doctor of alternative medicine, sporting long hair, a beard and glasses to hide his face.

War crimes fugitive Radovan Karadzic has been arrested near Belgrade and he posed as a doctor of alternative medicine, sporting long hair, a beard and glasses to hide his face.
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actually, I want to know a suitable method to split the sentence

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2008-07-24 9:44 am
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The suitable method to split the sentence :
War crimes fugitive Radovan Karadzic, whom has been arrested near Belgrade , posed as a doctor of alternative medicine, sporting long hair, a beard and glasses to hide his face.

War crimes fugitive Radovan Karadzic, which (cannot use which because he is a person) has been arrested near Belgrade, posed as a doctor of alternative medicine, sporting long hair, a beard and glasses to hide his face.

War crimes fugitive Radovan Karadzic has been arrested near Belgrade and (please change “and “ to “while” or “when” because the word “and” did not really tell the reader the timing between Karadzic was arrested and the time he posed as a doctor…)he posed as a doctor of alternative medicine, sporting long hair, a beard and glasses to hide his face.
Note : We used posed instead of posing because your sentences are in reported speech, while in the original sentence – the “posing as a doctor….” was additional information to describe the person.
參考: Myself
2008-07-24 11:05 pm
War crimes fugitive Radovan Karadzic has been arrested near Belgrade. He posed as a doctor of alternative medicine and sported long hair, a beard and glasses to hide his face.


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