請教英文翻譯

Dear Manager/Supervisor,

I wish to rearrage my working timetable for personal reason. Instead of starting at 8:30 a.m., I would like to start at 9:00 a.m., and finish work at X:XX p.m./

Thank you for your consideration,

Sincerely,

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Hope it helps

問(翻譯):本人想寫信給上司，關於(改返工時間，原本由八時三十分改為九時正，以私人理由。希望批准。)

答(英文翻譯):Myself want to write a letter for the boss, about (changes the doing over time, originally changes nine o'clock by eighto'clock 30 minute, by personal reason. Hope authorization. )

本人想寫信給上司，關於(改返工時間，原本由八時三十分改為九時正，以私人理由。希望批准。)

I want to write a letter to my boss, and it is about(changing the time of work
because of some personal reasons, from originally half past eight to nine o'
clock, hope you can approve.)

本人想寫信給上司，關於(改返工時間，原本由八時三十分改為九時正，以私人理由。希望批准。)
I want to write a letter to the boss, about (the change of going to work, changes 9:00 positive originally by 8:30, by personal reason. Hope authorisation.)
I hope I can help you.
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