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What things about living in a big city do you not like? (You can change the question to : What are the disadvantages that you think for living in a big city ?)
First of all, there are a lot of air pollution in a big city because of machines (using “machine” implies that the city is an industrial city, but I believe this is not what you want to talk about. You just want to talk about big city in general. So I suggest you to change “machine” to “too many electrical devices and air polluted transportation”). The air pollution will affect our respiratory system and causes respiratory diseases easily. Also, we cannot see the beautiful stars as those stars are hid by air pollution and lighting of buildings, how unfortunate it is ! (Using an appropriate punctuation can make your essay more impressive.)
In addition, most people just use money as their value standard in a big city. They only want to take advantages of other people, or vice versa. (Just using “vice versa” may not explain your idea completely. May be you can consider adding something like : or vice versa, they will be taken advantage by other people.) They almost don't know how to enjoy the nature such as lying on a lawn as well as watching (we use watch, not see, because see is referring to a short moment, while watch refers to a longer time and often with a hidden meaning of appreciation) the sky.
You also agreed with me, don't you?
2008-07-21 03:57:36 補充:
hide has 2 past participle which has the same meaning :
hid or hidden - both are correct.