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Are you going to use the paragraph above as an introduction when interviewing for a Form 6 place? If yes, then you may need a bit more information.
Here are some questions for you to think about.

1. What kind of major at University are you looking to get into?
2. What kind of career are you looking forward to?
3. How would you better prepare yourself during Form 6-7 for your further education? (e.g. Have you got any plans to improve your various skills - English, Time management? )

Also, I would suggest stating different things when talking about your interests and what you are good at. It seems to be a bit redundant to talk about design and drawing again and again.

Here is a sample introduction for your reference.
"My name is xxx. I just completed my Form 5 education in a government secondary school. My interests are drawing and graphic design. For instance, the process of brain-storming for design ideas is particularly intriguing to me. I am good at drawing and graphic design. (Please suggest what particular kind of drawing and graphic design, e.g. portrait, oil painting, etc.) I am looking forward to continuing my Form 6 studies at this school and hopefully getting a university place after A-level. "

I completed the F.5 in Government Secondary School. My interests are drawing, plane design and the ponder (about design). Advantage is drawing and image design. I hoped to be studied F.6 in this School, that can be possible to connect the study of university's degree. Thanks !

I graduated from a government secondary school and my interest is drawing, plain graphic design and brain storming (about design). I am strong in drawing and graphic design. I wish to be studying form 6 in order to streamline my studying in the university.
Thanks a lot!