高手幫我睇下文法....有無錯

I can understand your sorrow, but I guess your parents are feeling the same too.

Concerning this matter, don't you know how many times I've heard them crying on the line? And, don't you know how many sleepless nights they have gone through?

I know it's been hard for you, but after all, they are your parents. We are worried about you, and no one would like to see things happen like this.

Can it be called a family when members don't even speak a word to each other? For days you haven't talked to your parents, and they are becoming more and more nervous about you. So, they came to me to look for a solution about your marriage. But, I know you are the one to make the decision, not me. All I want to suggest you is to have a serious talk with your parents, care for their feelings, break the ice and tell them all you want to say.

They are getting older and older each day and time available for them are becoming less and less, and hence the chance for you to show them the filial piety deep inside your heart.

We can work together to overcome this branching. Trust me, all you need to do is to start having some words with them... that's what they want. There is an old Chinese saying, which proves to be always true, "We are a family".

I understand your sorrow(,but ) and I guess your parents should have the same feeling. For this matter, do you know how many times I've heard them crying (on) over the phone? (and) And, do you know how many (whole) nights they have (been awake) awoke?
I know it's (been) a hard time for you,but after all,they are your parents.We (are worried) worry about you (,) and no one would like to (see) observe things (go) going like this.
(do) Would family members (people look like) be regarded as a family when they don't speak even a word to each other? For (for )couple of days you don't (even) talk to your parents, they become more and more (nervous) conscious about you that they (went to ask) have asked me about the solution of your marriage,but I know (it's you who is) you are the one to make the decision, and I (can't) am not obliged but (in,all) I (want) have to suggest you (is) that you should really have a serious talk with them(,)and care about them, (speak out) say what you (want) ought to say (and broke) to break the ice.
They ( have become old) are getting older and older ,there is not( so long a way) a long way for them to go. Yet (yet), there is not (so) much time for you to show your filial piety (deep) which is ever deeply rooted in your heart.

We can work together to (over come) overcome this branching,all you need to do is to start (have ) having some words with them,that's what they want(,). (and as) Still remember a Chinese old saying (goes), ? ("we are a family" ) " We are of the same family".
Hope that you can treasure what you have already owned.

2008-07-16 19:09:49 補充：
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