pls help to check blw answer is good enough

2008-07-15 6:09 am

HI, pls help to check blw answer is good enough during the interview.

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Q1. Why did you chose this field?

Ans : I hv a friend who has been working as a merchandiser. From her, i know this industry is a bright/ prospective job, which i can develop my career for long terms. I decided to equip myself as a good merchandiser and that 's why i studied Fashion and Textiles in the Polytechnic University. After graduated, i can apply my knowledge to my job. I got much job satisfaction and learnt a lot of practice knowledge. I believe merchandising is my life career.

Girls like me, always love new things/ beautiful things, fashions. Working as a Merchandiser can provide me a lot of chances to get involve in trendy fashions. I love to work as a Merchandsier.

Q2. Why did you leave your previous job?

Ans : I want to broaden my career exposure, not just to work in a manufacturing factory, but also in trading company or even buying office.
These 2 years working experience in ABC Co, the daily job become routine. I would like to broaden my knowledge in different environments. Whatever there is new chance to learn, i would like to join.
I would like to upgrade my title as Merchandiser. Bcz ABC Co is an traditioanl style company, internal promotion seems not possible within this year. But i believe i hv the capability to work as Merchandiser, so i grasp this chance to prove myself.

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2008-07-19 1:09 am

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Q1. Why did you choose this field?

Ans: A friend of mine has been working as a merchandiser. I know this industry is a bright/ prospective job according to her, which I can develop my career for longer terms. I decided to build myself up as a good merchandiser and that's why I studied Fashion and Textiles in the Polytechnic University. After I graduated, I wanted to apply my knowledge to my career. I am satisfied for my tasks and learnt a lot of practical knowledge. I believe merchandising is the career for my life.

Girls like me, always love new stuffs/ beautiful things and fashions. Working as a Merchandiser can provide me many chances to get involved in trendy fashions. I’d love to work as a Merchandiser.

Q2. Why did you leave your previous job?

Ans: I wanted to expand my career exposure by not just working in a manufacturing factory, but also in a trading company or even a buying office.
The daily tasks become routine in these 2 years working in ABC Co. I would like to broaden my knowledge in different environments. Whether there is a chance to learn, I would like to participate.

I would like to promote myself as Merchandiser. Bcos ABC Co is a traditional style company, internal promotion seems not possible within this year. But I am confident that I have the capability to work as a Merchandiser, so I would like to take this chance to prove myself.

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幫你改了錯字, grammar, 亦冇幫你改得太多

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2008-07-18 17:11:17 補充：
改為:

Girls like me, always love new stuffs/ beautiful things and fashions. Working as a Merchandiser can provide many chances for me to get involved in trendy fashions. I'd love to work as a Merchandiser.

'provide many chances for me' 才對

參考: 100% self-corrected :)

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