中譯英 thx

曾於麥當勞做暑期功
I have been working in McDonald during summer holiday.
私人補習班老師，教導小學生功課默書
Private tutor teaching primary student lectures & dictation.

真係恐怖。答問題唔係應該o既，答ｄ自己 sure 正確o既答題先係應該o既。
曾於麥當勞做暑期功：I had a summer job at McDonald's / I worked at McDonald's for the summer.
請留意，絕大多數人，只知中文麥當勞，不知英文 McDonald's 有個 s，正如人人只叫 Window，不識 Windows 一樣。
I have also been done summer job in mcdonald 完全唔得，呢句用 passive，意思係「你俾人做 summer job」，解唔通。
樓上o既 I have been working in McDonald during summer holiday 一樣錯，因為用左 present perfect continuous tense，意謂「一直做暑期工到依家都未完」，咁人地點敢請你？
私人補習班老師，教導小學生功課默書：Private tutor teaching primary students schoolwork and preparing them for dictations.

可以就咁寫

曾於麥當勞做暑期功
I had a summer job in McDonalds.

私人補習班老師，教導小學生功課默書
Personal tutor for primary your child's dictation

2008-07-14 09:54:07 補充：
私人補習班老師，教導小學生功課默書
Personal tutor for primary child's dictation

手快打錯左

你錯了

應該是：

I have already done a summer labor in Mcdonald.

希望可以幫倒你

2008-07-14 09:30:43 補充：
不用感謝我，這是我應該做的