中譯英 ! 唔該 (10分)

Our company should increase advertising and promoting which is tailor-made for customers, in order to attract our target group of customers, and popularise our company, also let messages reach to customers effectively.
Moreover, the location of company's outlet should be around with more tourist agencies, which appeals loads of people.
Redesigning the outlet, makes customers enjoy the service more comfortably, simply lets in more and more customers.

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公司應該增加宣傳和推廣 , 配合客人而製訂有關的宣傳, 吸引公司的目標顧客群, 亦令更多人認識公司 .可將訊息有效地傳遞給顧客 。
另外公司門市的選址 , 應該選擇在較多旅行社的地區 , 這樣可以增加人流 。 重新包裝門市的設計 , 方便客人 , 客人可以更舒適地享受服務 , 自然吸引更多顧客
We should reinforce the advertsing and promotion. Promotional campaigns are suggested to be tailor-made to our targeted customers, so as to attract the right customers. As such, more customers can recall the image of our company, and our messages can be effectively delivered to the customers.
Further, the selection of location of our brances should be targeted to the districts where lots of travel agencies are found. In this regard, more customers can be located.
The design of our branches has to be repackaged to provide convenience to our customers. Should the customers be served in a comfortable environment, we can certainly attract more customers.


2008-07-11 12:57:34 補充：
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brances- typing error, it should be "branches"

The company should put more efforts in propaganda and promotion. It should establish the propaganda program according to the customer’s nature and needs so that we can attract our target customers and also let more people know about our company. An appropriate propaganda can also effectively convey our information and data to the customers.

As for the selection of location for the branches, we should try to find a place with more travel agency around so we can attract the man flow to visit our company. Moreover we should re-decorate our branches with proper design and packaging so that it can be more convenient for the customers. If our branches can provide a relaxing place for the customers to use our service comfortably, we will virtually attract more customers.