呢封信係寫比course leader 問有關由yr2 升到yr3 既事
Hi peter,
I am xxx, tom, a graduate student in vc diploma (11121) this year. I have sent a letter to you on June 23, but you were having a study trip. I am afraid that you miss the previous letter. The letter was about the course, vc higher diploma (11131). At that time, I heard from you that there is a mechanism for us to apply a form for year 3. Then john told me that the mechanism may be cancelled in this year.
Before the semester one begins, some of my friends told me that if you can get the highest mark in the class, you may go back to year 3. So I paid more attention in this year. Fortunately, my result has a little bit of a change and I succeed in getting the highest mark in the class. I look forward to attending year 3 and I am confident of my ability to take the challenge. It is important to me because I have learned not much things in this year and I want to learn more for my future career. Should I be given the chance, I will certainly do my almost to prove myself.
Few days ago, I heard something from my friends who study in interior diploma and product diploma. It is about their tutor said that if your average is higher than 65, then you may go to year 3. So is the same will happen at vc diploma?
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thx a lots