英文自我介紹

Good Morning.My name is Ashley Chan . I'm 17 years old. I live with my parents and I've a younger brother.We always talk with each other and we always go to museum together when we have spare time.I love my family very much.For School Work , I'm studying at Apple Collage and I'm a Form 3 student. My favourite subject is P.E. . I've a lot of good friends and teachers there. When I've problem , they always try their best to help me out. I enjoy to study with them. My biggest hope is I can go to other country to study my English better, and I promise myself that I'll try my best to achieve it.That's my presentation , thank you for spending your precious time to hear it!

17歲喇仲要人教講英文,你係咪大陸尼架?如果你想學好英文,唔洗去到外國先學到,但你連篇自我介紹都搞唔掂,仲講咩吖?你都係由基礎學起喇.
仲有呀,有幾個d英文有問題,唔識咪教人喇.
既然最佳回答o個個都知自己文法唔準就唔好教人喇,特別係i've.你到底知唔知I've點用架?唉

Good morning, sir. My name is xxxxx. I am seventeen years old. I am now studying Form 3 at xxxxx College.

My best-performing subjects are Physical Education and Science.

My ambition is to study abroad to improve my English. Being overseas, I can practice speaking English with foreigners and learn more about native English.

I believe that these practical experiences will be even more useful than classroom learning.

That’s it for my self-introduction!! Thank you!!

001的回答:
應該係I am seventeen years old 唔係 I am seventeen-year-old.

係have a chance to go 唔係 have the chance to go

002:
寫得唔太好...仲有係enjoy studying唔係enjoy to study
最後果2句...真係omg...唔好係你既presentation講= ]

003:
gramma冇咩問題不過就一句句咁怪怪的...i.e. 係咁i am...i am...

Good morning. I am XXX. I am now seventeen years old. I am a Form 3 student at XXX Secondery School. I am good at physical education (or PE) and Science. I am interested in these subjects.

I have a dream that I am very hopeful. I want to go to foreign to learn nature English. I think I can learn grea English in USA or England. If I learn more English, I could talk to foreiners easily.