歌詞改編Tie a yellow ribbon round

2008-07-08 11:14 pm
請幫我改編英文歌詞
老歌--- Tie a yellow ribbon round the oak tree

I'm coming home I've done my time
Now I've got to know what is and isn't mine
If you received my letter
Telling you I'd soon be free
Then you'll know just what to do
If you still want me if you still want me

Oh tie a yellow ribbon round the old oak tree
It's been three long years
Do you still want me
If I don't see a ribbon round the old oak tree
I'll stay on the bus forget about us
Put the blame on me
If I don't see a yellow ribbon round the old oak tree

Bus driver please look for me
Cause I couldn't bear to see what I might see
I'm really still in prison
And my love she holds the key
A simple yellow ribbon's what I need to set me free
I've wrote and told her please

Oh tie a yellow ribbon round the old oak tree
It's been three long years
Do you still want me
If I don't see a ribbon round the old oak tree
I'll stay on the bus forget about us
Put the blame on me
If I don't see a yellow ribbon round the old oak tree

Now the whole damn bus is cheering
And I can't believe I see
A hundred yellow ribbons round the old oak tree
I'm coming home
更新1:

是改編整首英文歌詞 我不要翻譯, 謝謝!!

更新2:

內容最好能夠生動活潑, 是要用來教學用的, 對象是國小小朋友, 謝謝

回答 (6)

2008-07-11 8:02 pm
✔ 最佳答案
[Verse 1]
I'm going in I've made up my mind
Now I've got to try if it can or cant grind
If you pull off my jockey
saying you'd soon be horny
Then you'll know just what to do
If you still want me if you still want me
[Chorus]
Oh put the cherry condom on my six inch pole
It's been three inch longer
Can I f*** your hole
If I don't see a cherry condom on my six inch pole
I'll fetch the gas pour it up my ass
Put the flame on me
If I don't see a cherry condom on my six inch pole
[Verse 2]
Sexy baby please do it for me
Cause I couldn't bear to see what I might see
I'm really still a midget
But you gave me your ten digits
A simple cherry condom 's what I need to set me free
I've wrote and asked her please
[Chorus x 1]
Now your whole damn body is sweating
And I can't believe I see
My cherry-condomed dick shoving in your p***y
I'm hitting home




Im so filthy.....
參考: ME in the U.S.
2008-07-18 2:16 pm
您看看這樣子適不適合
如果有些字你覺得不夠好的話,歡迎自行修改
希望對您的教學有幫助喔!

Come on children stand on your feet
Let's hold your hands together and let's dance
If you want to be happy
Just forget 'bout everything
Then you'll know just what to do
Dance around and sing, dance around and sing

Oh, put your hands up in the air and wave, wave, wave
Laugh out loud and sing
Shake your feet joyfully
If you want to be happy, make sure you get on your feet
Let's jump on the air, turn around like this
Laugh out loud and sing
If you want to be happy, make sure you get on your feet

Come on kids do it one more time
Let's put a smile on your face and say hi
If you want to be happy
Just forget what bothers you
Then you'll know just what to do
Dance around and sing, dance around and sing

Oh, put your hands up in the air and wave, wave, wave
Laugh out loud and sing
Shake your feet joyfully
If you want to be happy, make sure you get on your feet
Let's jump on the air, turn around like this
Laugh out loud and sing
If you want to be happy, make sure you get on your feet

Now everyone is cheering
Sadness no where to be seen
A hundred smiley faces what a loving scene
Lalalala~~~~

2008-07-18 07:37:39 補充:
jump on the air



jump in the air 才對

抱歉 沒有檢查清楚@@"
參考: 自己
2008-07-11 2:35 pm
請問要指導何種內容呢?

或者都可以

就是使用簡單的單字

國小學生看懂的文字嗎?
2008-07-09 7:59 pm
~~改編歌詞~~
版大是要教小朋友唱的~~
2008-07-09 3:50 am
是翻譯還是改編?
2008-07-08 11:54 pm
我是看不懂妳是要我們怎麼改編歌詞?


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