叩門信.中學唔該入黎..好易英文

2008-07-07 9:24 pm
第1段:I am writing to apply for a discretionary Secondary One place at your school.

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記住係要叩門架!!
更新1:

唔係幾明!??

回答 (1)

2008-07-07 9:48 pm
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Dear Principal,
Please excuse me for this unexpected letter expressing the eagerness of mine and my son / daughter for the education offered by the XXXX Secondary School.
My son / daughter and I are very much impressed by the education offered by your school which stresses a balanced and all-rounded development of one’s potential. The school is so renowned for its academic and extra-curricular activities standing that all parents would like to have their children educated in such a sounding environment. I attribute the success solely to the devotion and enthusiasms by the Principal and every members of the school. The XXXX Secondary School really makes a difference.
I am sure my son / daughter will obtain great benefit if he / she is with the XXXX Secondary School. And follows his / her own initiative in learning and being diligent. Though he / she might not have done as well as others, he / she is likely to show great progress if some form of enlightenment is given by someone who is a real educationalist. Moreover, my son / daughter started on playing the piano at last year and has attained the stage II level. His / her talent in this area is likely to be developed further as the XXXX Secondary School has an excellent reputation for music.
I would be most grateful if my son / daughter could be given an interview with the Principal so that you may obtain a more comprehensive understanding of my son / daughter. Copies of my son / daughter's school reports, certificates and testimonials are enclosed for your consideration. Should anything be missing, I can be reached at 12345678 for clarification.
Thanks for your kind attention.
Regards,
Yours truly,
_____________________
(希望幫到你喇~)
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