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Deppside D

2008-07-06 11:54 am

－i think your company provide a wide space and big challenge for every designer because we can be a part of exciting project,trying different type of designed style
and have sucessful/preasure feeling from public eyes which is reall rare chance to do such thing like that

－I always read psychology/effect sales books,this knowledge is really helpful in design works because all we do is connecting with people heart.

－I do not pretend i'm really great and do not afraid all the
criticize because i'm nothing to lose.This heartfelt wishes
make me more powerful.

THX!

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[匿名]

2008-07-07 6:50 am

✔ 最佳答案

－ I think your company offers a wide space and big challenge for every designer. One can be a part of an exciting project; trying different types of designs and styles
and experiencing success from pleasing the public. There is a rarely chance to do so.

－ I enjoy reading psychology/sales books. The knowledge I acquire is very helpful in my designing because what we do is connect with people and their feelings/desires.

－ I do not pretend to be an expert and am not afraid of criticism because I have nothing to lose. My heartfelt wishes
make me more powerful.

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