pleace check grammar in paragraph!?

I spent time DOING photo editing when i WAS twelve years old but i startED to think seriously about design from THE AGE OFeighteen.I know i haven't HAD much experience and but i AM still confidenT and passionATE to become a designer who can break the rule and "condense society power"

－how the people react is one of the most expectED thingS in the world,only creativITY works AND can let me be oustanding and unique that give me a hope i will get attention from others someday and also give me meaning to my life (SENTENCE TOO LONG)

－I like to imitate all mannerS of designed works and i learn QUICKLY,only i do is assimilate their element,concept and setting (DOESN'T MAKE SENSE - REPHRASE).That's much more useful than learning in school and it's free because i read all them iALL online

-the last survivor in the world

-What qualifications do you have that ARE better than THE others?

Although I have been working with some aspects of photo editing since I was twelve years old, I started taking it more seriously at the age of eighteen and have continued to since then. My work and academic experience may be slim as of now, but I have the confidence and passion to become a designer who can break the rules and "condense society's power".

Individual reaction drives me to be more creative, unique, and outstanding. Others' reactions give me hope and meaning that will someday gain me the recognition I am looking for in life.

Even though my skills are "self-taught" and my style is unique, I am able to imitate others' designed works by mimicking their elements, concepts, and settings. This technique has given me a useful skill that isn't always learned in a traditional school setting. I have researched some of the best and worst on the internet and have learned a lot from all of them. This method has not only given me the ability to reproduce designs, but has encouraged me to develop my own sense of style. I am now able to incorporate some design aspects that I have "duplicated" with some of my original designs to create what I think is exceptional and outstanding works of art.



(and just as a side note: I would flip flop the second and third sections. Put the third section second and the second last.)

This is pretty good overall, but here's a rewrite of the paragraph with the grammar you missed.

I spent time doing photo editing when I was twelve years old, but I started to think seriously about design since I was eighteen. I know I don't have much experience or academics now, but I still have the confidence and passion to become a designer who can break the rules and "condense society power."

I know how the people react is one of the most expected things in the world, and only creative works can let me be outstanding and unique. They give me a hope that I will get attention from others someday and also give meaning to my life.

I like to imitate all manner of designed works and I learn very fast, but when I imitate a design, I assimilate their element, concept, and setting. That's much more useful than learning in school and it's free because I read them all in pages on websites and online.

The last wood in the world/ the last survivor in the world. (I don't know what you're trying to say here).

What qualifications do you have that are better than the others?

i just want to correct this part :

seriously about design from eighteen to now.

it should be:

seriously about design from eighteen until now..