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Deppside D

2008-07-05 7:26 am

雖然長左d,但希望有心人回答,一千萬個謝!

-I spent time to do photo editing when i'm twelve years old but i start to think seriously about design from eighteen to now.I know i haven't much more experience and acadmic now,but i still have confidence and passion to become a designer who can break the rule and "凝聚社會力量"(<--幫我翻譯英文)

－how the people react is one of the most expectant thing in the world,only creative works can let me be oustanding and unique that give me a hope i will get attention from others someday and also give me meaning to my life

－I like to imitate all manner of designed works and i learn so fast,only i do is assimilate(吸取) their element,concept and setting.That's much more useful than learning in school and it's free because i read all them in page one/webside and online
magazine.

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[匿名]

2008-07-05 8:37 pm

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I've tried to do photo editing since I was twelve. I started to think seriously about designing when I was eighteen. Though I don't have much experience and academic training on it, I am passionate thus confident about becoming a professional designer with unique style.

我唔係好明點解會break the rule?你想講打破常規??同埋"凝聚社會力量"有咩關係??

I love to impress the others by showing a unique me. That's nothing better than having my designs to catch their attention; and someday, catch the world's. My life will thus be fulfilled.

I am a fast learner and willing to absorb all kinds of things about designing. Through the learning, I will extract other styles' essences about ideas and techniques to build my own style. I find it a more effective way to learn than having lessons in school. I can find all I would like to know readily at hand in PageOne and from various websites. And that charges me for nothing.=]

參考: juz a try...i've re-written the passage..hope this'll help.

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