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(I made some corrections in each paragraph. I hope I didn't misunderstand what you want to write.)

－I think your company provides a wide space and big challenges for every designer because we can be a part of exciting projects,
trying different types of designed style and have successful feeling and satisfaction (instead of pleasure) from the public eyes. It is really a rare opportunity (instead of chance) to be able to do something like that.

－People’s reaction is one of the most exciting (instead of expectant) thing in the world. Only creative work enables me to be outstanding and unique. It gives me the hope that I will get attention from others someday and gives me meaning to my life.
(* use shorter sentences)

－I like to imitate all manner of designed works and I learn very fast.
What I do is copy (?) their elements, concepts and settings. That's
much more useful than the teaching in school and it's free
because I read them in page one(I don't know what this means), websites, and online magazines.

－I always read books about Sales Psychology. This knowledge is really helpful in design work because all we do is connecting with people's heart.

－I do not pretend I am really great and I am not afraid of the criticisms because I have nothing to lose. This mindset (instead of heartfelt wishes) makes me more powerful.

2008-07-09 19:38:30 補充：
You may want to consider giving more points next time ;-)