有冇人幫我..我想要英文自我介紹既sample呀

Hi everybody,
My name is Terry. I'm XX years old. I am a student from ABC College. Today, I'm happy to introduce my self to all of you.

I live in XXX. I have got two brothers and two sisters; we are living in a flat. I have got a dog called Dingo, he is 6 years old. I love my dog very much; I walk him twice a day. My flat is not too far from school, it just takes 20 minutes to walk there. . Sometimes I meet my friends and walk to school together. It would be much happier than walking alone. We'd talk about everything, such as the studies, the news, the family, friends and classmates, so and forth. I have a best friend, called David. He's very tall, his height is 1.7 m, but I am only 1.4m but he never teases me about the height. We often study and do things together. He often helps me once I have difficulties. He's a really nice guy.

My favourite hobby is playing chess. It can train our mind to think faster and plan good strategy. The elderly always say, 'Act before thinking twice'. That is very helpful in our daily life. Besides playing chess, I like running and swimming. They're good for health and develop and maintain a good physical balance. I go to gym centre to exercise thrice (three times)a week and go swimming twice a week.

My favourite subjects are Mathematics and Science. Especially in science subject, I did a great job in school performance. I got a prize for academic achievement of it. It really cheered me up and I'm sure I will keep on studying more about science and technology as these two subjects are relating together. I do not know what I will choose for my future career but it is certain in the domain of Science.

以下係由網址www.cpgjobs.com 抽出的有關Self-introduction的建議

Cover four areas in your life: your early years, education, work experience, and your current situation. Keep your complete answer to about 2 minutes; don't ramble or elaborate. This is your 2-minute self-introduction and you will be very accomplished at giving it by the time you are in job interviews. Because this question usually comes early in the interview, you will gain confidence by knowing you can answer it well.

正如上述的建議
1)只需準備約2分鐘的自我介紹內容可以吧!
2)內容一般包括四方面: 你過往的簡單介紹, 你的教育情度, 你的工作經驗, 和你的現況。
3)切勿太詳細或甚至將話題扯得太遠!!
4)自我介紹的一般是面試初段的問題, 如果答得好, 會令你增添信心。

答案只要來得簡單流暢就可以。作為主考, 一日不停要會見不同的應考者, 又長又沉悶的回答, 並不會令他們提得起興趣, 精簡獨到的答案才會令你突圍。只有你本人才最清楚你自己的情況和特點, 任何sample只能夠用作參考, 但並不能夠針對性解決你的問題。

An example of self-introduction

My name is Tachi. I am 25 years old. After graduation from form 5, I have been working as a salesman in xxx company for five years. During my day-to-day work, I have to serve customers speaking different languages such as Cantonese, Putonghua and English. I realized that better language ability is a great advantage and can enable me to communicate better with customers. So, to upgrade my competitiveness, I am now studying Putonghua and English classes after work at night.

The reason why I decided to leave my current job is that I desire to seek a new job with better career prospects. And your company is what I am looking for. I am interested in selling cosmetics and so I applied for this post. With my past working experience and my outgoing personality, I am confident that I can manage this job well.

My colleagues usually describe me as “serious and responsible”. And I get along well with others in my working environment. So, I hope I can have an opportunity to join your company and be part of your team.

Hi everybody. My name is Terry. I'm a boy, a student from XXX school / college. Today, I'm here to introduce myself to all of you.

I live in XXX. It's not too far from my school. I walk to school on foot. Sometimes I'll date my friends to walk to school together. It would be much happier than walking alone. We'd talk about everything, such as the studies, the tests, the exams, the family, the other friends and classmates, so forth. I have a best friend, named David. He's taller than me, about 1.7 metres tall, and I'm only 1.4 metres. But he never teased me about the height. Once he even helped me to tide up my shalf at the top right bottom of my room in my house. He's really nice.

I'd like to choose chessing of my first choice of hobby. It's a fun game playing chess with others. It can train our mind to think more faster and firmer. Elderly always says, 'Act before thinking twice', that's what chessing helps us in our normal life. Beside playing chess, I also like running and swimming. They're physically good for my health. I can exercise always that I have a private GYM and swimming pool. Running and swimming help me maintain a healthy body.

My favourite subject is Mathematics and Intergrated Science. Especially in science subject, I did a great job in school performance. I got a subject price for academic ahievement of it. It really cheers me up and I'm sure I'll keep going. I'll study more about science and technology, however, both isn't detachable that you need to improve technology to invent more useful machines and, you need to investigate more science to improve technology. In actual, I really want to be a scientist! To succeed, I know I need to work more and more harder.

This is the end of my self-introduction. Thanks for listening.

2008-07-03 20:23:04 補充：
To yppah123:
I have to admit that yours is much better than mine. But, could you please regard both me and my answer? I just want you to know, I did my best. You shouldn't have changed my answer to be the best answer, because it's crystal clear that you're indirectly pointing out I'm USELESS.