急! 5年級作文! 請幫我檢查我的英文文法。

1.‘woke up’ not ‘wake up’
2.‘a nurse’ not ‘the nurse’
3.‘to send her a bunch’ not ‘sent her a bunch
4.‘her classmates in 5C’ instead of ‘her 5c class schoolmate’
5.‘Amy was glad and pleased with them’ instead of ‘Amy felt glad and pleased to them’
6.When it was time for the operation’ instead of ‘Is time to do the operation’
7.‘the nurse took Amy to the operation room.’ instead of ‘the nurse bring Amy to the operation room,’
8.‘After an hour,’ instead of ‘after an hour.’
9.‘her parents were beside her’ instead of ‘her parents were stayed beside her’
10.‘The doctor told Amy that the operation was a success.’ instead of ‘The doctor Amy the operation was smooth going.’
11.‘Before they left, they had not forgotten to say thank you to the doctor.’ Instead of ‘Finally, before they leaving they haven’t forgot to say thank you to the doctor.’




I think it should be "Main verb _______________ tense"

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On the day of the operation,she woke up at half past six in the morning,Amy'smother was next to her.Suddenly,the nurse came into her room giveher a bunch of flowers and a get well card. Oh,It was given by her 5c class schoomates.Amy felt glad and pleased to them.
It is time to do the operation,the nurse bring Amy to the operating room,after an hour. Amy woke up and saw her parents stayed beside her the doctor Amy the operation was smooth going. Amy and her parents were very happy.Finally,before they left they had not forgotten to say thank you to the doctor