改善英文行動二十五. 希望大家盡力幫忙

1. You should POSITIVELY answer the question --- YES or NO.

*Yes, I would like to work as an actor.

2. Even if you're not performing well in soap opera, you're still famous. By the way, you should use the word 'perform'. Use an 'act' is okay.

*I will be famous as I act well in soap opera.

3. 'Whatever' is telling people WHAT, but you should use a 'wherever' to tell people WHERE you go shopping.

*In addiction, wherever I go shopping, ...

4. I don't really understand this : 'people will take autography of mine form me and yell out' ;

Autography refers some handwriting track, I guess you wanted to mean people want your signature. 'Of mine' is useless in the sentense because you then said it's from you. Also 'form me' I guess you mean from me. You can briefly use 'MY SIGNATURE' to replace this clause. 'Yell out' refers to some people shout because something BAD happened, it's totally not a commending word. You could use a word 'cheer' to replace the 'yell out'.

5. After 'what's more' you should use a comma --- *What's more, ...

6. You can't pretend a person, you can only ACT like a person. Pretend is not a commending word either. It means something fake. You can use 'pretend' to say something that you MEAN to for avoiding some bad things, such as 'I pretend hearing nothing that I know mum's calling is to ask me to wash the dishes.'

7. 'It is more easy than working in company' is missing an article.
*It is more easy than working in A company.

8. The final sentense, actually appearance and talent is inborn. You cannot say it's easy or not. You can use 'easy' to describe something that you can aquire after you're born, but not in this sentense. By the way, you can use a 'though' for a disjuntive in this sentense.

*However, an actor should have a good appearance and talent, though not everyone have one. / , though it's not easy to get one. / , though people can seldom have it.

2008-06-30 21:44:01 補充：
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2. Even if you're not performing well in soap opera, you're still famous. By the way, you SHOULDN'T use the word 'perform'. Use an 'act' is okay.

I would like to work as an actor. I will be famous if I perform characters well in soap opera. In the future [,] I may be invited by famous directors for movie [-] making. In addiction, whatever [whatever => whenever] I go shopping, people will take autography of mine form [form => for] me and yell out, that feeling is wonderful. what's [What's ] more? I can earn much money but I do not need to work hard because I just [need to] pretend a person [.] [ I think ] it is
more [ more => much] easy than working in [a] company. However, an actor should have a good appearance and talent, it is not easy.


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