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2008-06-30 12:42 am
topic: To have lots of money,must have the happy life?

i don't agree . i think that you could have a happy life despite having not much money.

what doesn't the happy life define? i think that happy life is mean someone enjoy his life with happy.then,what reason will effor happy or not in the life?
everyone has each difference,so we can't say only one thing.but,the nomarl reason is the money.

you could buy more things if you have lots of money.for example:you can buy some foods,clothes and drinks.
when you wre hurger,you didn't have a food to eat and water to drink .how would you feel for?that's painful,right? if that situration contures a few days,you will be death.that's a painful life,not happy life.

although the money is important thing,another thing has more important in my mind,that's the love.for example:the love contains the love of parents ,the love of friends, the love of lover.you could solve the problem with you parents
if you will have problem.you could be made happy by your lover if you won't
be happy. so,i thing that the money isn't important than the love.

At last,i make a concution. i don't agree that have lots of money,must to have happy life.

回答 (3)

2008-06-30 9:36 pm
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Topic: To have lot of money,must have the happy life?

I totally disgreed. I believed that you do not need a lot of money to have a happy life.

What is the definition of the happy life? Happy life means people can enjoy their happiness deep inside their heart and with their cheerful feeing about their life. Even though money can buy what you need and the moment of happiness but this happiness is only in materials need and it will not last long.
You need money to support your daily necessarties, such as buying food for your hunger, buying all kind of material for your personal need, and buying or renting house for your shelter. You cannot live with out money but it did not mean you are having a happy life.

Although money is very important for the physical needs but you also need to satify your mental needs, such as love and care. Love can be parental love, friendship's love, couples' love and cares from your love ones which you cannot buy from the money.

My final conclusion is even though you have a lot of money but it does not mean you will have a happy life.

( You really need to pay more attention on your punctuation, spelling and the sentense structure. You should read more story books in order to improve your writing)
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2008-07-01 4:27 am
Questioner : (1) To have lots of money, must have the happy life. ------> With a lot of money, a happy life can definitely come . (2) I think that you could have a happy life despite having not much money. ------> I think that everbody can have a happy life without too much money.


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