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2008-06-30 12:11 am
topic:the summer vacation is drawing near.you,liming,want to find apart-time job.write an application letter of about 120-150words

dear manager,

hello!my name is cheng x x. i need to gain the sale clothes job with part time.i have a experience of this job.i had selled some clothes to custumer for help my mother when i were ten years old. i will try my best in my job if i am invited.i won't absent and lately go to company if i get the job.

i hope that manager could take a main choice,thank you.

hope i will see you soon.

cheng XX
29TH,june,08

回答 (2)

2008-06-30 8:27 am
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(Applicant's Address, Contact Phone Number)

Date : 29th June, 2008
The Manager,
(Name of Company Name)
(Company's Address
Dear Sir/Madam,
Application for the Post of Part-Time Salesperson
I take the liberty of writing to you to apply for the post of part-time salesperson as I will be graduated from a high school this summer.
Since I have practical work experience in my mother's fashion shop during the past years' summer vacations and was given exposure to sales operation in my part-time jobs , I believe that I am able to do the job well.
In addition, having learnt Mandarin and knowledge of commerce for almost two years at school would be a definite advantage for this job.
I would much appreciate it if you could consider my application. Enclosed please find my resume. I will be available for an interview at your convenience .
Yours faithfully,
(applicant's signature)
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Cheng XX
Enclosure : One copy of my resume .
2008-06-30 12:17 am
親愛的經理,

你好我的名字是鄭x十。我需要獲得出售衣服的工作的一部分, time.i有一個經驗,這job.i已selled一些衣服,以custumer為幫助我的母親,當我被十年歲。我會盡我所能在我的工作如果我invited.i將不會缺席和最近到公司,如果我得到的工作。

我希望經理可以採取的主要選擇,謝謝。

希望我會看到你盡快。

鄭XX條
29日, 6月, 08





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