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What factors made you enjoy or not enjoy a school subject?
The teachers are the most important factors I think. If the teachers are responsible, they will think a lot of methods to make sure
that students are interesting in their subject. For example, the English teachers can arrange english dramas or movies for students, those students not only learn English, but also feel entertaining.
Apart from that, the teachers must be kind and hard-working because none students like to be scolded by teachers, and then it will cause that students are afraid to ask teachers question.
Now, you also think the teachers are the most important factors to make students enjoy a school subject, don't you?
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2008-06-29 7:16 am
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2008-06-29 10:59 am
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我看到有以下的錯處,希望幫到你~應該是
1)What makes you enjoy a school subject?
事實上,這句說法仍有點怪
enjoy a school subject=== 享受一個學科???
like a school subject ==== 喜歡一個學科
另外,What factors made you enjoy or not enjoy a school subject?
made ===> makes ===>這裡不可用過去式 ,原理和 what do you like 一 樣
" or not" 要置在句子最後==> enjoy sth or not
不過在這裡是不能用 " or not",否則便成了"中文英文"
2) students are interested inXXX
XXX is interesting ==>xxx令人感到有趣
XXX is interested in???==>xxx感興趣於???
3)english teachers {without the}(第2,4,7行)
"the"有指定某人的意義,而這裡的"english teacher"是指所有,普遍的
eng teachers
4)They will think a lot of methods to make their students interested in
意思上的問題
to make sure..... ==>保證學生感興趣於
to make their students ...==>令學生有興趣於
5) no students like to be scolded by their teacher
no one like to be scolded
只可用no one ==>無一個人 或是 no students===>無一個學生
6)those students not only learn English, but also feel entertaining不可以這樣
用not only,but also
因為verb 的性質並不相同
7)and then it will cause that students are afraid to ask teachers question
這句句子並沒有前因~仔細再看一次你就知道
所以應刪去
8)must be ==> should be
語氣不宜太強硬
參考: me
2008-06-29 8:15 am
What factors made you enjoy or not enjoy a school subject?
I think teachers are the most important factor. If the teachers are responsible, they will think a lot of methods to make sure that students are interested in their subject. For example, if English teachers can spend the extra effort to arrange english dramas or movies for students, students can, not only learn English, but also feel entertained. In this way, students will be able to learn better as it is a more interactive way to learn.
Apart from that, teachers must be kind and hard-working. No students like to be scolded by teachers, and neither like teachers who are harsh on them. Teachers without kindness and patience will cause students to be afraid to ask questions when they do not understand. Thus, that would lead to students not enjoying studying.
Now, that I have listed some reasons and examples, would u also feel that teachers make a important factor in making students enjoy a school subject?
I think teachers are the most important factor. If the teachers are responsible, they will think a lot of methods to make sure that students are interested in their subject. For example, if English teachers can spend the extra effort to arrange english dramas or movies for students, students can, not only learn English, but also feel entertained. In this way, students will be able to learn better as it is a more interactive way to learn.
Apart from that, teachers must be kind and hard-working. No students like to be scolded by teachers, and neither like teachers who are harsh on them. Teachers without kindness and patience will cause students to be afraid to ask questions when they do not understand. Thus, that would lead to students not enjoying studying.
Now, that I have listed some reasons and examples, would u also feel that teachers make a important factor in making students enjoy a school subject?
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