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My favorite food
I like chocolate when I was young, but now I like to eat healthy food,
such as vegetable, fruit, and a bit of nuts, etc. All these (no are, because you have a “have” in this sentence) have (not too much – too much is a negative word, while having a lot of vitamin is good) a lot of vitamins. Sometime I take (you do not eat yoghourt and milk, you either drink it or take it. Since you put yoghourt and milk together, so you should use “take”) yoghourt and milk products, they can provide calcium for me. I don't eat (no ing after do, does, did, just bare infinitive, that is : no change in the tenses of the verb) before I sleep ,because I can gain weight. (it can be fat – if you want to use “it”, you have to change to – it can make me fat) .
I hate bitter food. But when I feel sick, my mother always gives me a bowl of Chinese medicine, but I don't have any choice.

Notes :
- Always use capital letter for “I”, not “i”.
- No space before a punctuation mark.
- Leave one space after a punctuation mark. Leave 2 spaces after a full stop.
- “something like that” can be used in speech, not so often in writing.

My favorite food
I like chocolate when i was young, but now i like to eat healthy food .
like vagetable , fruit , and a bit nut, something like that .these are had too
much vitamin. Sometime i eat yoghourt and milk products, it can provie
calcium for me.I don't eating before i sleep ,because it can be fat .
I hate bitter food , but when i feel sick ,my mother give me a bowl of chinese
medication,but i don't have any choice.

I liked cholcolate when I was young. Now I like to eat healthy food e.g. vegetables, fruit and some nuts. They have a lot of vitamins. Sometimes I take dairy products like yogurt. they provide me with calcium. I do not eat anything within the four hours before I go to bed. Eating before bedtime makes people fat. I hate bitter food. But when I am sick, I have no choice but to take the bowl of chinese medicine prepared by my mother.

1. I do not like chocolate now, I only liked it when I was young.
2. Vitamin is a countable noun. Here we are talking about different kinds of vitamins in different kinds of healthy food.

When I was young, I like chocolate. But now, I like to eat healthy foods instead, for example, vegetables, fruits and a small amount of nuts. These foods contain a lot of vitamins. Sometimes I will also have some dairy products, such as yogurt and so on. They can provide with with calcium. I don't eat for four hours prior bedtime, because it will make me fat.
I detest foods that have a bitter taste, but when I am ill, my mother always makes me swallow a large bowl of Chinese medicine, I don't have a choice then.