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1) My name is Mandy. I am Twelve. I am a clean and dilligent girl. I like to make handicrafts.

2) I have been study at Kei Faat Primary school for six years. I like going to handicrafts at school. I will miss all my friends from my primary school, becasue the teachers and classmates are very nice to me.

3)My happiest time was when i became my school prefect. My most anxoius time was when i was waiting for the result of my interview. My Most enjoyable time was when i went to camping with my friends.

4) I am so glad that i have got a warm family. There are my dad, mum, and me. I have to thank my mum and dad becasue i can have anything i want. I hope that will be happy all the time.



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I have been study in Kei Faat Primary School for six years.
"have been study" is wrong.
Have studied -- present perfect tense
Have been studying -- present perfect continuous tense
Have been studied -- present perfect tense (passive voice)
Have been study -- WRONG

You should say "I have studied in Kei Faat Primary School for six years".

1)My name is Mandy . I am a twelve-year-old girl. I am intelligent and diligent.I enjoy making handicrafts so much that I have joined the school's handicrafts Club for the past couple of years.

2)I have been studying in Kei Faat Primary School for six years. I will miss everything from my mother school as the teachers and classmates are friendly and helpful.

3)My most unforgettable moment was the time when I became a school prefect . My most anxious moment was the time when I was waiting for the result from my interview. My most enjoyable experience was going camping with my classmates.
4) I am grateful to have a warm family with my Dad and Mum. Thanks to my parents, I am able to have everything I need for my everyday life. I do hope our lives will remain satisfying and fulfilling in the years ahead.