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收到你的訂單號碼123 , 送貨日期是6月23日.
We have received your Purchasing Order No. 123. Delivery date is 23rd Jun 2008.

We have received your purchase number 123 and the delivery date will be on June 23rd.
I think we should use future tense on the delivery date, just my opinion!

PO #123 has been received for a delivery on the 23rd of June.

We have received your Purchase Order No.123, the delivery date is 23rd June.

We have received your ordering invoice numbered 123 and the date of delivery is on the 23rd of June.

Thank you for your order with the reference no. of 123 and the delivery date is 23th June 2008.


2008-06-20 11:53:49 補充：
更正:

Thank you for your order with the reference no.123 and the delivery date is 23th June 2008.

We have received your order with serial number 123. The date of delivery is 23 June.