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2008-06-20 3:30 am
請翻譯以下內容做英文

以下係我們的現有系統的流程:
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跟據我們的理解, 無論 “系統 A” 與 “系統 B” 都唔適合取代現有的系統. 建議保留現有系統直至新系統誕生.

系統 A與系統 B 不能取代現有系統的重要原因:
- 系統 A 沒有貯存合約的地方
- 系統 A不能查詢貨倉的存貨量
- 系統 B 沒有記錄每次輸入資料的時間


4點現有系統需要改善的地方:
- 申請人手 (3-5 working days per month) 去幫手輸入合約內容, 當合約內容能夠準時每月入妥, 便能避免每次審計前才將客戶維修資料輸入系統

- 在 “地址 1” 與 “地址 2” 之間, 建立完善的運輸系統, 幫助每日不用步行20分鐘去提取零件

- 建立伺服器去貯存現有的系統, 取代現今所有系統與資料貯存在個人電腦上, 從而可進行定期 backup

- 由於所有資料貯存在個人電腦上, 當工程師夜間工作時, 沒有正當的遙控工具幫助工程師去讀取系統裡的相關資料 (e.g. 合約內容, 受保設備表……等等)

以下幾個重點是新系統必需具備, 才能成功通過每年的審查
- 有貯存合約的地方
- 有記錄每次輸入資料的時間
- 清楚記錄每次維修的詳細內容
- 每單維修工作用了什麼零件
- 可在系統直接訂貨
- 在非辦公時間, 可被遙控 (查貨, 查合約內容, 查維修進度)
- 可配合流動裝設去update 維修內容與時間

回答 (3)

2008-06-20 5:33 am
✔ 最佳答案
According to our knowledge[or knowing], neither system A nor B is suitable to replace our present system. [I] Recommend keeping this system until a new system suitable is produced.

The Main Reason of not Replacing the system by A or B:

System A has no storage area for storing contracts.
System A cannot give us information about the stock level of the warehouse.
System B cannot record the time of data input.

Four points the existing system needs to improve in:

apply[i think it is recruit?] for more labor to input data of the details of contracts, because when the information can be input every month, a fuss to input the customer's data just before the deadline can be avoided.

building a good transporting system between place A and B can help to save time as we now need to go back and forth for 20 minutes to get a spare part.

construct a server for storing the system existing now, to replace saving systems in personal computers, thus allowing a regular backup to be done.

since all data is saved on personal computers, when an engineer is working at night, he has not enough remote tools to help them to read the system's information. eg contract contents, protected spreadsheets etc.

Below showed some important things the new system must be equipped with to pass the anuall test:


have a contract-storing area

can record the data input time

can clearly record the details of each maintainance

records the items[spare parts] each maintainance used

can order goods directly from the system

can be remotely controlled during non-working hours.

can coordinate with mobile componets to update the repairing content and time.
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2008-06-20 5:25 am
To our understanding, neither "System A" nor "System B" fits the bill to replace our current system. We propose the continue usage of the current system while a new suitable one is developed.

Key factors why System A and System B fail to supersede the current system:
- System A provides no storage space for contracts
- Inventory inquiry cannot be performed on System A
- System B fails to record time of every data entry point


Four areas in the current system that requires upgrading:
- Employ data entry part-timers (3-5 working days per month) to enter contractual terms instead of entering customer's maintenance work details into the system just before every audit. Only when contractual terms are timely entered each month can that be avoided.

- Establish a complete transport system between "Address 1" and "Address 2" to save the 20 minutes of walking daily to retrieve parts.

- Set up a server to store the current system and data, replacing the current method of storage on personal computers. Scheduled backups are to be performed.

- As data are stored on personal computers, engineers on night-shift has no proper way to access the relevant information from the system remotely. (e.g. contractual terms, list of insured facilities, etc.)

The following must be met by the new system to pass annual assessments.
- storage space for contracts
- records time of every data entry point
- clearly logs every maintenance work details
- parts used in every maintenance work order
- orders goods directly using the system
- in non-office hours, the system must be able to be remotely controlled (inventory inquiry, contractual terms inquiry, check on maintenance work progress)
- compatible with mobile gadgets for updating maintenance work time and details
2008-06-20 3:41 am
With according to ours understanding, regardless of “system A” and “system B” does not suit the substitution existing system. Until the suggestion retains the existing system the new system birth.

System A and system B cannot substitute for the existing system's substantial clause:
pneumatic system A has not stored the contract place pneumatic system A not to be able to inquire the goods warehouse goods in stock quantity pneumatic system B record each time input document time


4 spot existing systems need to improve place:
- the application manpower (3-5 working days per month) goes to the helper to input the contract content, when the contract content can 夠 the punctual each monthly salary proper, before then can avoid each time auditing, only then the customer service material input system

- in “the address 1” and “the address 2” between, establishes the perfect transportation system, helps not to need to walk every day 20 minutes to withdraw the components

- establishes the server to store the existing system, the substitution nowadays all systems and material storing on the personal computing, thus may carry on regular backup

- because all material storing on personal computing, when engineer at night work, the right remote control tool has not helped engineer to read in system's correlation data (e.g. The contract content, guaranties the equipment table ......And so on)

The following several key points are the new system essential have, could - have the storing contract place through every year examination - to have the detailed content - each e-dimensional repair work successfully which the record each time input document's time - clear record each time serviced to affect any components - to be possible in system direct ordering - in the non-office hour, might control remotely (looks up goods, looked up contract content, looked up service progress) - to be possible to coordinate the flowing to install update the service content and the time


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