幫我睇下篇文邊d位有錯...

At that moment, I was going to see what would be examined. Suddenly i heard something so I ran quickly and hid myself under a desk in the staff room. One teacher came and (no was) aware that her notice(notes ??) has disappeared. Actually, it was in my hand. She screamed and ran around. I have never seen this teacher acted like such a crazy woman. After a while, she squatted down and found her notice. Fortunately, she seemed unable to find me. Afterward she left the staff room. I was sacred so I still stayed under the desk. Then, she came back." Oh, my God!" I thought. She brought a lot of cockroaches and put them on the floor. I didn't know why she would do that. I just knew I was afraid of them so much. It made me jump right up and threw the notice away.
Finally, the teacher caught me and threw a cockroach at me to punish me. I deeply regretted that I stayed there when she was taking the cockroaches. She is my Chinese teacher--the most crazy teacher I have ever seen.
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At that moment, I was going to see what would be on the final exam but I heard something (or footsteps) suddenly, so I ran quickly and hid myself under a desk in the staffroom. A teacher came in and noticed that her exam disappeared. Actually, it was in my hands. She screamed and then ran around. I had never seen a teacher getting crazy. After a while, she found the exam on the floor.
Fortunately, she seemed unable to find me and she left the staffroom. I was
sacred so i stayed still under the desk but I heard that she was coming back. "Oh,My God"I thought. She brought a lot of cockroaches and put them on the floor.I didn't know why she did
that.I was so afraid of them and they made me jump right up and threw the exam away.
Finally, the teacher caught me and threw a cockroach at me as a punishment. I deeply regretted what I did and I stayed there while she was cleaning up the cockroaches. She is my Chinese teacher--the craziest
teacher i have ever seen.

*Is this a real story?? There are so many weird points that I don't understand...

At that moment, I was going to see what would be in the exam. Suddenly, I heard something so I ran quickly and hid myself under a desk in the staffroom. One teacher came in and noticed that her notice disappeared. Actually, it was in my hand. She screamed and ran around to search for the notice. I have never seen a teacher acting in such a crazy way. After a while, she squatted down and found the notice. Fortunately, she seemed unable to find me. Afterward she left the staffroom. I was still so scared that I stayed still under the desk. Then , she came back. "Oh my God!", I thought. She brought a lot of cockroaches with her and put them on the floor. I didn't know why she would do that. I only knew that I was so afraid of them that I jumped right up and threw the notice away. Finally, the teacher caught me and threw me a cockroach to punish me. I deeply regretted staying there when she was bringing in the cockroaches.
She is my Chinese teacher - the craiziest teacher I have ever seen.

Hope this helps. Good luck=)

2008-06-19 17:47:07 補充：
At that moment, I was going to see what the questions in the exam would be.

(I think this is better.)
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