請幫我改這篇英文(好簡單的)

2008-06-16 10:26 pm
本店設有閉路電視,如發現偷竊,本店會報警追究.
(若不對,請幫我改正,萬分感謝)
My shop installs the video system ,if detect who steal our goods, we must call the police.

回答 (4)

2008-06-16 11:06 pm
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Hi,
I have changed your sentence to the following :
This shop has installed video cameras to avoid illegal act. Once a theft happens, we will report to the police and put the case in the court for jurisdiction.

2008-06-17 00:54:33 補充:
Please change the sentence to a passive voice :

Video cameras have been installed in the shop to avoid illegal act. Once a theft happens, we will report to the police and put the case in the court for jurisdiction.
參考: Myself, Myself
2008-06-18 7:47 pm
閉路電視 = CCTV

CCTV in progress
Call the police if any stealing
2008-06-17 7:11 pm
本店設有閉路電視,如發現偷竊,本店會報警追究.
若不對,請幫我改正,萬分感謝)
My shop installs the video system ,if detect who steal our goods, we must call the police.

This shop has installed the closed circuit video system, once burglar is detected, we will call the police immediately for jurisdiction.
參考: Own
2008-06-16 11:11 pm
WARNING:
SECURITY CAMERA IN USE,
SHOPLIFTER WILL BE PROSECUTED WITH NO TOLERANCE!
參考: myself


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