怎樣可以令到這段文字更通順? 或更有詩意?
或更像一幅畫的簡介? 謝謝
Both of these two girls are me.
The left one is the girlish me and the right one is the boyish me.
The left one is lovely and friendly.
The right one is cool and mystical.
The style of left one is like the composition of acrobat and tightrope walkers.
The style of right one is like the composition of acrobat and juggler.
怎樣可以令到這段文字更通順? 謝謝!!
2008-06-16 2:35 am
回答 (3)
2008-06-16 7:18 pm
✔ 最佳答案
Both of the two girls in the picture are in fact me too. The left one is the girlish me who is lovely and friendly, being a composition of acrobat and tightrope walker. The right one is the boyish me who is cool and mystical , being a composition of acrobat and juggler. 
2008-06-16 7:18 am
Both of these two girls are me you may see.
The left is girlish and the right is a boyish me.
She is lovely and friendly,
But he is cool and acts mystically.
She is like an acrobat and a tightrope walker.
while he is an acrobat and a juggler.
The left is girlish and the right is a boyish me.
She is lovely and friendly,
But he is cool and acts mystically.
She is like an acrobat and a tightrope walker.
while he is an acrobat and a juggler.
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