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Margaret's Museum was the critically-acclaimed British-Canadian dark film drama in 1995. The beach and the endless sky were the most beautiful view in the film. Because of Margaret’s Museum was a powerful film which took place at Glace Bay in Nova Scotia, it told about the story of a young girl who lived in a coal mining town where a lot of the death men found from the accidents in "the pit" had become almost routine. Therefore, Margaret’s Museum was the fineness Canadian literature film. Margaret also lost her father and a brother in the mining accidents, she has chosen to be an outcast, vowing never to become a miner's wife in the film. Because Margaret did not want to lost her family again. But finally Margaret fell in love and married a miner. Unfortunately, Margaret lost her husband, young brother and grandpa again in mining accident. Their death drove Margaret into a mental breakdown and in her surreal world she decided to create a "special" museum as the memories of all those who have died of this horrific mining conditions.

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Because of Margaret’s Museum was a powerful film which took place at Glace Bay in Nova Scotia
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Because Margaret did not want to lost her family again
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But finally Margaret fell in love and married a miner
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it told about the story of a young girl who lived in a coal mining town where a lot of the death men found from the accidents in "the pit" had become almost routine
it told........ death men were found from the accidents in the pit, it had become almost routine