看看這段英文有甚麼問題

Who do you think you are? Cut it out. You have a lot of nerve. You’ve gone too far! You are out of your mind.

Corrections:
Who do you think who you are? Stop it. You’re just crazy. You’ve gone too far! You are out of your mind.
or
Who do you think who you are? Quit it. You’re crazy. You’ve gone too far! You’re mad.

Reasons:
I changed “Who do you think you are? ” to “Who do you think who you are?” because that’s Standard English.
and
I changed “Cut it out.” to “Stop it / Quit it” because “Cut it out.” is mean 剪它出來.

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2008-06-13 08:22:21 補充：
Answer No.6 You’re insane. also correct.

每句都岩啊..冇問題..
不過唔算狠囉..

看來全部都, 值A.

只有, 想話人地係神經病 you have a lot of nerve 不大對. 一般人不會這樣講, 而是:
You must be insane.
例: You smoke two packs of cigarettes a day? you must be insane.

You have a lot of nerve. 解做: 你真夠膽量.

但係佢寫''you have a lot of nerve.'

Absolutely no problem. This is more verbal writing than general English writing.

This is how we speak when we are mad.

all right...

to the guy before me you has a lot of nerve doesn't make sense....

2008-06-11 21:40:02 補充：
#doesn't

no problem 呀!

You have a lot of nerve.
you can write as:
You has a lot of nerve.

每一句都正確，没問題。

Who do you think you are?
你以為你自己是誰?
Cut it out.
停止!
You have a lot of nerve.
你很有膽量.
You've gone too far!
你太過份了!
You are out of your mind.
你的腦筋有問題.

每一句都正確，沒有問題。
Who do you think you are?
你以為你自己是誰? (即是說你不要以為你很了不起)
Cut it out.
停止! (亦可解釋為閉咀)
You have a lot of nerve.
你很有膽量。 (你膽子也不小)
You've gone too far!
你太過份了!
You are out of your mind.
你的腦筋有問題。 (你想的東西有問題)