有個人來到地球,他覺得地球的環境很差.
他用魔法來令環境變佳.
首先,在垃圾堆塡區使用魔法能量把全部垃圾消滅
使用魔法能量立例徵收膠袋稅,,
令市民都可以自覺地攜帶環保袋,,
另一方面,
應該種植更多樹木,
使用魔法能量在馬路的周圍種植更多種子
而且樹木會很快生長,
不砍伐樹木,使用蘆葦造紙
樹木能夠呼出更多的氧氣,令空氣清新
使用魔法能量把全部汽車裝設環保引擎
令汽車發出更少的廢氣
以改變空氣質素,
A man come to the earth,he feel the earth environment is very bad.
He use magic energy to become good the environment
First, in the landfill use magic energy remove all the rubbish.
Then, use magic energy legislation collect plastic bag of tax.
People can consciously take the environmental protection bag.
On the other hand,
the government should plant more trees,
Use magic energy plant more seeds around in the road,
and the tree will very fast grow.
Don’t cut down the trees, use reed make the papers.
The trees can make oxygen, we can inhale fresh air.
Use magic energy chase all the cars equip environmental protection engine,
Make all the cars send out less of waste gas,
With change an air quality.
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Dogs are friendly animal. they can keep you accompany. if you train them well, they will know how to do some tricks. And when they achieve, you would feel so successful! dogs most like to eat and sleep. They need to sleep a lot. when you are away. They will sleep.
Dogs is like to play very much.If you throw the ball,he will tetch back to you.If you praise him. Him will be very happy.
For my dog, When I sat on the chair. he will come to sit next to me. I will take my dog to swimming pool evey day.
狗是友好的動物。 他們能保存你陪伴。 如果你把他們訓練得很好，他們將知道該如何做一些詭計。 而且當他們達成的時候，你將會覺得如此成功！狗大部分喜歡吃而且睡覺。他們需要睡得很多。當你出去的時候,他們會睡覺.
狗非常喜歡玩.你可以丟球.讓他們為你把它接回來，而且稱讚他們. 他們會非常開始.
我的狗, 當我坐在椅子上的時候,他將開始緊鄰我坐。我會每天帶我的狗到游泳池.
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2008-06-11 4:06 am
回答 (3)
2008-06-11 4:45 am
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我試下la!A man arrive the earth,he feels that the earth's environment is very bad.
He uses magical energy to improve the environment
First, he uses magical energy to clean up all rubbishes in the land.
Then, he uses magical energy to set up legislation about taxation of plastic bags.
People can consciously use the environmental protection bags.
On the other hand,
the government should plant more trees that grow up fastly,
the government also uses magic energy plant more seeds around in the road.
People don’t cut down the trees.
People can use reed to make papers.
The trees can generate oxygen, so we can breathe fresh air.
He uses magic energy to encourage all drivers to change environmental protection engine,
it can make all cars to discharge less waste gas, so it can change the quality of air .
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Dogs are friendly animal, so they always string along with you . if you train them well, they will know how to do some tricks. And when they achieve, you can feel so successful! Dogs always like to eat and sleep. They need to sleep a lot. When you go out, they will sleep.
Dogs like to play.If you throw a ball,they will catch the ball and give it to you.If you praise them, they will be very happy.
For my dog, When I sit down, it will sit next to me. I will take my dog to swimming pool evey day.
I hope that I can help you!
參考: me
2008-06-13 7:39 pm
Note: [ ]→must be changed; ( )→optional; /→can use either one
Both of your Chinese and English version contain some problems so I changed and added some word onto it. If you don’t like it, you can pick others’ corrections. ^.^
PS: {would} can be both present and past tense.
A man [comes] to the earth, [and] he [feels] the environment is very bad.
He [uses] magic to [turn the environment] become [a] good environment[.]
First, in the landfill[,] [he uses magic to make all the rubbish disappeared].
Then, [he uses his power to make legislatives to pass the plastic bag tax collecting bill and make the citizens consciously carry a recycle bags].
On the other hand, [he makes] the government [thought (that) they] should plant more trees, [and uses] magic [to put] more seeds [next to] the road.
[And these trees grow very fast].
[Besides, He makes people didn’t chop down (these) trees and using reeds to create papers].
[When trees provided oxygen, we could have more fresh air to breathe].
[Lastly, he uses] magic [to turn cars’ engines into a eco-engines, so that cars didn’t releast flare gas.]
[Because of that, air pollution will be improve.]
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Dogs are friendly [animals], (that) they can [be your companions]. [If] you [trained] them well, they [can] do some tricks. [Also,] when they [have accomplished], you would feel [you have succeed]! [Most] dogs [are] like to eat and sleep [and they spend most of the time to sleep]. [When you are away, they would also go to ]sleep.
[Beside, dogs like/dog likes to play a lot]. [When] you throw [a] ball, [they/it] will [get the ball] back to you. And if you [admired it, it would be very happy].
For my dog, When I [was sitting] on [a] chair[, it] would come [and] sit next to me. I [also would] take/bring my dog to swimming pool (with me) evey day.
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2008-06-15 06:59:17 補充：
On the other hand, he makes the government thought (that) they should plant more trees, and uses magic to put more seeds next to the road.
can also be:
On the other hand, he makes the government thought (that) they should plant more trees, and uses magic to put more seeds on the sidewalk.
2008-06-15 07:03:32 補充：
Corrections: [Most] dogs [are] like to eat and sleep [and they spend most of the time to sleep].
Should be: [Most] dogs [are] like to eat and sleep [and they spend most of the time on sleeping].
2008-06-15 07:05:51 補充：
Corrections: And if you [admired it, it would be very happy].
Should be: And if you [admired them/it, they/it would be very happy].
2008-06-15 07:08:06 補充：
Corrections: For my dog, When I [was sitting] on [a] chair[, it] would come [and] sit next to me.
Should be: For my dog, When I [was sitting] on [a] chair[, it] would came [and] sat next to me.
2008-06-15 07:11:22 補充：
Please ignore my 2008-06-14 19:08:02 的補充.
2008-06-15 07:17:44 補充：
I mean my 2008-06-15 07:08:06 的補充 (時差的問題......sorry about the confusion.)
Both of your Chinese and English version contain some problems so I changed and added some word onto it. If you don’t like it, you can pick others’ corrections. ^.^
PS: {would} can be both present and past tense.
A man [comes] to the earth, [and] he [feels] the environment is very bad.
He [uses] magic to [turn the environment] become [a] good environment[.]
First, in the landfill[,] [he uses magic to make all the rubbish disappeared].
Then, [he uses his power to make legislatives to pass the plastic bag tax collecting bill and make the citizens consciously carry a recycle bags].
On the other hand, [he makes] the government [thought (that) they] should plant more trees, [and uses] magic [to put] more seeds [next to] the road.
[And these trees grow very fast].
[Besides, He makes people didn’t chop down (these) trees and using reeds to create papers].
[When trees provided oxygen, we could have more fresh air to breathe].
[Lastly, he uses] magic [to turn cars’ engines into a eco-engines, so that cars didn’t releast flare gas.]
[Because of that, air pollution will be improve.]
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Dogs are friendly [animals], (that) they can [be your companions]. [If] you [trained] them well, they [can] do some tricks. [Also,] when they [have accomplished], you would feel [you have succeed]! [Most] dogs [are] like to eat and sleep [and they spend most of the time to sleep]. [When you are away, they would also go to ]sleep.
[Beside, dogs like/dog likes to play a lot]. [When] you throw [a] ball, [they/it] will [get the ball] back to you. And if you [admired it, it would be very happy].
For my dog, When I [was sitting] on [a] chair[, it] would come [and] sit next to me. I [also would] take/bring my dog to swimming pool (with me) evey day.
To learn more about grammmar please visit:
http://depts.gallaudet.edu/englishworks/grammar/main/index.htm
2008-06-15 06:59:17 補充：
On the other hand, he makes the government thought (that) they should plant more trees, and uses magic to put more seeds next to the road.
can also be:
On the other hand, he makes the government thought (that) they should plant more trees, and uses magic to put more seeds on the sidewalk.
2008-06-15 07:03:32 補充：
Corrections: [Most] dogs [are] like to eat and sleep [and they spend most of the time to sleep].
Should be: [Most] dogs [are] like to eat and sleep [and they spend most of the time on sleeping].
2008-06-15 07:05:51 補充：
Corrections: And if you [admired it, it would be very happy].
Should be: And if you [admired them/it, they/it would be very happy].
2008-06-15 07:08:06 補充：
Corrections: For my dog, When I [was sitting] on [a] chair[, it] would come [and] sit next to me.
Should be: For my dog, When I [was sitting] on [a] chair[, it] would came [and] sat next to me.
2008-06-15 07:11:22 補充：
Please ignore my 2008-06-14 19:08:02 的補充.
2008-06-15 07:17:44 補充：
I mean my 2008-06-15 07:08:06 的補充 (時差的問題......sorry about the confusion.)
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