一篇英文作文(關於海灘)，可以點作？！

I went to the beach which had many people there. I went to the seashore, and walked along it. I felt that I was I was so lonely because there were many pair of families in the beach.

Then, I went back to the sand and wanted to found some seashells. There were
many seashells in colourful colour. They had some dots on it too. They are so beautiful.

It was evening. I looked at the sun between the sea ant the mountain. The sun needed some rest, I think. Many people went back home. I saw nothing in the sea. I decided to swim for a while. I put on my swimsuit and went to swim
immediately. Although the water was cool, it was enjoyable to swim alone.

I love going to the beach.

當係120字
第一段,寫下時間同你點解要去沙灘。20

第二,三段,記住諗d活動,你覺得開心,唔開心既,最少四樣。50

第四段,寫回程既經過。10

第五段,寫感想。20

夠100字
希望幫到你!^^

2008-06-10 19:38:55 補充：
仲有,加d修飾既句子。
如:
The beach is beautigul.I like the bach.
係結尾果度加d野,例如:
我仲想去之類，一定夠１２０字！
８８

可以描寫那個海灘的特別之地方,回憶.
例如:
XXOO beach occupy a important position in my memory.
跟著再寫一件對你有極大回
憶價值的事件(當然要和海灘有關的!!)
例如:
My six years bithday is passed at XXOO beach...........
( ^講述當時的事^)
最後來個首尾對應!