check grammar(10 pts)

(1)
...but it maybe no people could break my record until I die.
changes to
BUT MAYBE no people...

(2)
It shows that he has a long-term target: keep being “the fastest of the world”...
changes to
... target: TO KEEP being...
and
... the fastest IN the world... (sounds better)

(3)
...continuously to breakthrough himself.
changes to either
TO CONTINUOUSLY MAKE A breakthrough...
or
CONTINUOUSLY MAKING A breakthroough...
[NOTE: breakthrough is a NOUN]

(4)
When he wins, he will not smug.
changes to
... he will not BE smug
or
... he IS NOT SMUG
[NOTE: smug is an ADJECTIVE]

(5)
He thinks that he hasn’t done it very well. Then he will find out where he didn’t do very well and then improve it.
changes to
IF he thinks he hasn’t DONE VERY well, HE will find out...

(6)
That makes me understand that I am not the best one when I have good result. So I shouldn’t complacent.
changes to
.. good RESULTS AND I shouldn’t BE complacent.
[NOTE: complacent is an ADIECTIVE]

(7)
I will keep on strive after I success.
changes to
... on STRIVING...

2008-06-08 22:49:47 補充：
(3)
...continuously to breakthrough himself.
changes to either
TO CONTINUOUSLY MAKE A SELF-breakthrough.
or
CONTINUOUSLY MAKING A SELF-reakthroough.

Take away himself.