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2008-06-08 8:08 am

請幫我看一下文法正確嗎？
請幫我看一下文法正確嗎？
請幫我看一下文法正確嗎？

我的文法超爛的，可是我是讀應用外語系的哦。
讀得超累的。以下是我的文章，各位大大們看一下有無正確？

看得懂就超強的啦，

順便幫我延伸到250個字。感恩啦~~~~~~~~
My favorite tourist location is Lake to God(向天湖). Lake is located in Nans(南庄). It's one of the most famous lakes in Taiwan. The first time Imeet the Lake that because my job. I went to the Lake in business. So I see the Lake.
I was stunned by its beauty. The color of the Lake's water was deep green. It was as beautiful as a picture.
The lake is truly a paradise, and while I was there. I think to relaxed and happy
All in all, I like the place.

回答 (1)

Pear

2008-06-12 1:15 pm

✔ 最佳答案

My favorite landmark in Taiwan is the Shiangtian Lake. Shiangtian Lake is located in Nanjuang, which is a small town (or is it a city or province or what?) in Miaoli. It is also one of the famous lakes in Taiwan. The first time I went to there was because of my job (do you have some business to do with the lake? or what is the reason you went to the lake? what/who brought you to the lake?). The Lake's beauty deeply attracted me the very first time: the color of the water was as green as a fine piece of emerald. With the clouds in the sky and the sunshine, a beautiful picture formed right in front of me.
Shiangtian Lake is truly a paradise to me. While I was there and standing in front of the lake, I felt relaxed and calm. I would like to visit this place again in the near future because it would turn my bad mood away.

*向天湖 = Shiangtian Lake

If you could answer the questions I asked, your paragraph would be around 250 words. Let me know if you need further help!

參考: me; http://www.nanchuang.gov.tw/big5/index.htm

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