✔ 最佳答案
poem唔一定要有rhyme,
其實好似中文既新詩,
唔一定要既!
不過當然如果您可以做到有rhyme,
讀起上黎會好讀一D!
但如果只係想寫poem表達心中感受,
就唔駛喇!
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2008-06-06 22:25:49 補充:
有首Bruce Lansky作既英首,
押韻得黎又幾搞笑,
比您參考下喇!
I love you.
I love you.
I love you, I do.
But don't be excited.
I love monkeys too.
2008-06-09 00:21:12 補充:
應該是repetition~~
Repetition: A poetic device that repeats its self over and over again.
有D似中文既反覆~~
參考: I am an English teacher.