我想問poem....

芯兒

2008-06-06 4:02 am

我想問poem係咪一定要rhyme嫁!!
係咪唔rhyme冇咁好嫁....

更新1:

咁repeatation呢??

回答 (2)

mrmomrmomrmo

2008-06-06 5:07 am

✔ 最佳答案

poem唔一定要有rhyme，
其實好似中文既新詩，
唔一定要既！
不過當然如果您可以做到有rhyme，
讀起上黎會好讀一D！
但如果只係想寫poem表達心中感受，
就唔駛喇！
圖片參考：http://tw.yimg.com/i/tw/ugc/rte/smiley_1.gif

2008-06-06 22:25:49 補充：
有首Bruce Lansky作既英首，
押韻得黎又幾搞笑，
比您參考下喇！

I love you.
I love you.
I love you, I do.
But don't be excited.
I love monkeys too.

2008-06-09 00:21:12 補充：
應該是repetition~~
Repetition: A poetic device that repeats its self over and over again.
有D似中文既反覆~~

參考: I am an English teacher.

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chan

2008-06-06 5:09 am

poem did not need to be really rhyme, but if there have rhyme is better

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