英文自我介紹..(20分) !!

I just finished my A Level Examination. Even though the result is not revealed yet I have already realized that it will not be too satisfactory. Therefore I would like to take a part time job for a longer period so I can have more time to train up myself and understand which direction I should opt for as my career. (I do not suggest you to mention進修下 because in this case all employer will think that you are just looking for a short time job and you will return to study after this summer.)
Since I have been working in the service industry before, I found myself quite suitable for a job that needs interaction with the customers, and I also believe I am good in communicating with other people. This is the reason why I think this position is very suitable for my strong points.
My working experience included being a cashier in McDonald’s, sales person of Movenpick, and customer service of an advertising company which required working in the site which is the Ocean Park, the major roles in this position was to maintain the order of the site, monitor the customer flow, answering enquiries and providing information to the customers. Actually with these experiences I found myself a person who can have good interaction and communication skills.
Personally I am an easy going person who likes to work with various people and I paid best attention to any job that I am required to do. Moreover I have a responsible manner and strong in controlling my emotion. My weak point is that I may be too concentrated in work sometimes. ( I suggest you not to talk about 有時會太過執著一樣野...容易信人, d fd話我太林善 since no employer would like their staff to have such characters)

I have basic computer knowledge and I can work on Microsoft Excel and Words.
In terms of language I am fluent in writing English and Chinese. I can also speak fluent English, Cantonese and Mandarin.





2008-06-04 01:00:43 補充：
I hope I can join your company because I can have steady income and learn a lot in your company. This is very important to me since I really want to widen my scope of vision in this area.

2008-06-04 01:01:01 補充：
I am confident that I can be able to monitor my work within a short period because I am willing to learn and work hard. Thank you for your time.

You should write some you are good at, like which language you can talk,
what you can do, like using computer(but do not tell the thing that not refer to the job you will interview)

Here are some example:
Good moring XXX(the man/ woman you meet)
I am XXX(your name), I am came from XXX university (or the school
you came from)Thanks for giving me a chance to have interview

I know X language, like, English, Cantonese, Japanese...(as many as
you know, it must be true)
(Now you can talk about what duty you have done, what reward you have got in school, but must refer to the job you will interview)
(If you want to write adjective, you can write when you are talk about
the duty, reward in your job.
( you must say that you are hard-working enough to do all the job, that the
Boss may think you can done it(It just my thought, no need to believe it))
At last, you must say that it is glad if I can work in you company, I will
try my best to work.






I don't know if it is good enough for you to interview.
I just try my best to write it. It is your job, not ours, you should
write it yourself, it is just my opinion
I am just a From 3student, although I don't know how to write , but I
have write many passage is nearly the same one


If there are some mistake or question you want to ask, please ask. I hope I can try my best to help you
or other could help too

2008-06-04 00:23:34 補充：
If I follow this you should write THe hold passage is:
Good moring XXX(the man/ woman you meet)
I am XXX(your name), I am graduation in From 7, my accomplishment isn't very good, but I will learn if there have time, Iwill study hard.
Thanks for giving me a chance to have interview

2008-06-04 00:23:54 補充：
I am prudential, easiness, won't to be calculating, and
I have continence ability
It is important to the sense of responsibility when we work, I think I can do this well
I know X language, like, English, Cantonese, Japanese...(as many as
you know, it must be true)

2008-06-04 00:24:34 補充：
(Now you can talk about what duty you have done, what reward you have got in school, but must refer to the job you will interview)(I follow yours you should add more): I know how to use computer, Word, typing

2008-06-04 00:24:54 補充：
And I know how to talk to other easily, how to write
(If you want to write adjective, you can write when you are talk about
the duty, reward in your job.
I am work in Ocean park, for help people about the information...

2008-06-04 00:25:03 補充：
( you must say that you are hard-working enough to do all the job, that the
Boss may think you can done it(It just my thought, no need to believe it))
(At last, you must say) it is glad if I can work in you company, I will
try my best to work.

要幫你作..咁你都要比番D 你的資料給我們吧!!!!
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