20分,急到死......我想問老師要我寫畢業典禮的講詞,仲要係英文,我作好左啦,但我的英文唔點,請各高手比d意見我啦!

wawa,,, i think you really need to pay special attention on your gramma...
Let me help you to proof-read your speech=]

""To...As we are going to leave, we are very touched. We will definitely miss our primary school life. I still remember the times we laughed, cried, studied, played and discussed with each other.

Here, I woul like to express our gratitude to your beloved teachers. Although sometimes we were naughty, you still keep on helping us and forgiving our mistakes. Your patient makes us realise what truth is, you make us adultness.

Among all our classmates and friends, sometimes, we may have quarrels. But after awhile, we understood one another and restored our relationships. Throughout the primary schoollife, our friendship are even closer. We will never forget our friends and shall treasure this friendship among us.

Although our primary schoollife is coming to an end. We will remember all our best memories. These meaningful days we spent are now marked deeply inside all our hearts. Once again, thanks you to our dear parents, our principal, all our teachers and classmates. Thank you!

((remember,,you should not put all our ideas together without organization.
you need to separate them into different aspects, eg: to teachers, to classmates..
I Have help you to organize the ideas.
Hope you do well in your speech=] ))

Tonight we will be celebrating and quite rightly so. I think Graduation day is our big day. We are leaving behind the safety and security of college. We have more than a basic understanding of our subject. We may know exactly what we want to do. We may have to add to our existing qualification or find a new career altogether.

Speaking of friends you are leaving some behind today. Over the past few years they have shared your workload, ambitions and your lunch breaks not to mention your socialising. It is hard to part with them and whatever about the global village the world can be a big place and it s easy to lose touch. That is why I am suggesting to you make concrete arrangements to stay in touch by email or phone.

We always remember the person who speaks kindly of us. Take time to enjoy the beauties of nature and to care for them because without water and air our planet, and you, cannot survive.

Finally, thank you so much all the tutors, principles and classmates, hope you all enjoy your life.

2008-06-02 22:36:21 補充：
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