English question!!!!!

I think the Lee Lai Shan is one of the Hong Kong hero.
She is a hero because she is the first Hong Kong
people who won the Olympic Games. She teaches
us that if we work hard, we must have the chance to
win.

Kelly Chan Wai-Lam is Hong Kong＇s greatest hero. She＇s tall and thin, and at age 35 she must be very wise. I like her music, especially her dance music. She has defeated so many of China＇s enemies in war. I hope she lives 700 years.

To me, hero is only a label, anyone can be a hero. A caring mother; loving
father; a road construction worker; a nurse; the hard working students; the volunteers: all are heroes... .