我想問下以下,英文文法有沒錯

1) today we discusses the issue of the birthday party,we divided the jobs up to different people to organise the birthday party. i got the job of buying different types of food to the party. And we asked question about the entertaiment we should do in the party.
2)i thought the food i buy must have to have the soft drink Coke,sweets and so on. I throught about the entertainment would proberly just ve singing, playing television mechanical games and so on.
3)to the above i think you have giving us lots of different idea but i think the entertainment should weather or not contain some longan games
4)now we need to summarises of what we have discuessed
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1: Today the issue for discussion is the birthday party since I to have to
buy different food for the party. We also need to think about the place to have the party. Another question is the entertainment program. I hope each of us can think of a game that is suitable for all the people coming to the party. Moreover let’s discuss on what kind of presents we should buy for XXX (the one who is having the birthday)
2: I think we must buy some food and some soft drinks. Someone has to book the birthday cake in advance so they can put some words on the cake for us. W We also need candies and so on. For the location I think we may go to in my home. But for the entertainment I think we may sing, play television games and so on. Then we can play the games that are suitable for all the people coming to the party.

3: I think what you said are very good suggestions. But I think the
entertainment programs are too few. Whether or not should we play some longan (??) games

4: Above are the summaries on our discussion on what we must buy and prepare for the birthday party.

sorry to say that I did not fully understand what you said. Can you re-write it in Chinese language.
Thanks!