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May be you can try this as below:

My little sister and I also join with my friends went to Landmark North on Saturday. At that day morning, I dress up after clean up. Later, we went to Yuen Long by car. Then, we was arrived Landmark North by bus. Meanwhile, we have some meal in KFC. Besides, we also went to window shopping after we finished our meal. We came back Yuen Long by bus after window shopping. Moreover, we bought some foods for dinner and finally we came back home by mini-bus.
^^ Hope it can help you!! ^^

I went to Landmark North Plaza with my young sister and my friends on last Saturday. In the morning, after we dressed up and brush our teeth, we went to Yuen Long. After we arrived there, we took a bus to Landmark North Plaza. Then, we had a meal in KFC. We went shopping as we finished our meal. In additional, we took a bus to go to Yuen Long to shop some foods for dinner. Finally, we went home by bus.

Last Saturday, I went shopping at Sheung Shui Plaza with my little sister and my friend(s). On that moring, i brushed my teeth and washed my face, then i put my clothes and shoes on. Afterwards, we (drove, toke the bus, toke the train......what ever you like...)to 元朗(dont know the english for that...). After we arrived, we toke the bus to Sheung Shui Plaza straight away, and ate at KFC.
After we're all filled up, we then started the shopping. When the shopping was over, i toke the bus to 元朗 to buy some food for dinner. After that, I went home by the mini-bus

2008-06-01 02:26:09 補充：
take out the ' bit, i dont know why it does that

2008-06-01 02:27:05 補充：
i mean the we're

Last Saturday, I went to shopping in Sheung Shui Plaza
with my sister and friends .
At the morning, I brush my teeth and dress up.
We got a bus to Yuen Long then changed the bus
to Sheung Shui Plaza.
Arriveing Sheung Shui Plaza, we got a place KFC to have our lunch.
We all full up and started window-shop.
Afterward, I went back to Yuen Long by bus for bought some food for dinner. Finally, we came home by mini-bus.

Saturday, my younger sister, my friend and me wonder around at Landmark North. In the morning, firstly I brushed my teeth, then I worn the clothes and shoes. Then we went to Yuen Long by vechicle. after arrived Yuen Long, we went to Landmark North by bus, after that we went to Kentuncky Fried Chicken to have meal. We go for shopping after we have full, after shopping, we went to Yuen Long buy food for supper. At the end, we went home by bus.

Saturday, I went to Sheung Shui Plaza Shopping with my younger sister and friends . At the morning, I washed up myself, then get changed. We take a bus to Yuen Long. When we arrived we changed bus to Sheung Shui Plaza, we took some food in KFC. Finished our meal, we started our shopping. After than we took a bus to Yuen Long market to buy some food for dinner and back home by mini-bus.

Last Saturday, my sister, my friends and I has a nice time in Landmark North. In that morning, first of all we went to Yuen Long after brushing the teeth and wearing the clothes and shoes. Then, we went to Landmark North by bus. Next, we had our lunch at KFC. After the meal, we went shopping in Landmark North. After that, we returned Yuen Long by bus and went to buy some food for that night's dinner. Finally, we went home by mini-bus.


p.s. 有ｄ字眼的次序不同，因為不能逐個逐個字咁翻釋的