改求職信~~~~急~~~~~(20分)

2008-05-27 10:38 am

我朋友介紹我去見工~
但求職信不知道點寫~~
求職信一定要提到朋友名~~
佢話唔洗好詳細~~
如果將下面既改~
應該點改~~
假設朋友名係 may~~~
點樣可以將 "This is an application for the above position you advertised in the Employment Labour Department on 17th December"呢句~
改成朋友介紹~~

Dear Ms Lam
Application for the position of Assistant Merchandiser
This is an application for the above position you advertised in the Employment Labour Department on 17th December. Now as I am desirous of obtaining such a position, I should like to apply for the same.
Yours sincerely,

回答 (1)

Baggio

2008-05-27 11:49 am

✔ 最佳答案

Hi,
Please note you can change your application letter as follows :
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Dear Miss Lam,
Re : Application for the position of Assistant Merchandiser
I am applying for the position of Assistant Merchandiser in your esteemed Company. I learnt about this opportunity through my friend May (you should mention who is May, if she is a staff of this company, you should say : ….my friend May who is working in your Company. If she just have business relationship with this company then you should say : ….my friend May who is your supplier, etc.) and I am sending you this application letter because I believe I possess the necessary qualification for this position.
If you can grant me an interview I will be able to explain my background to you in details and answer any question you may have on me.
Thank you for your kind attention.
Yours Faithfully,
_____________
YYY

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