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2008-05-25 11:26 pm
以下文章每行都可能有一處錯誤,請幫忙改正
(1)My favourite hobby is swimming. I first start swimming
(2)in P.2. I have swimming for 4 years. I usually go swimming
(3)each weeks with my parents. Sometimes I go swimming
with my friends after school.

(4)I can swim for 20 minutes without stopping. I am good
(5)swimming backstroke.Wearing a swimming cap makes me
(6)swim faster.

(7)Swimming is a good exercise. It is good for my healthy.
(8)Furthermore, the weather in Hong Kong is suitable for
(9)swimming most of the time. So I can swim throughtout
(10)the year. I also like watching the swimming events in
(11)the Olympics, and I hope I may become a lifesaver one day.

回答 (1)

2008-05-25 11:54 pm
✔ 最佳答案
(1)My favourite hobby is swimming. I start swimming
(2)in P.2.I have swum for 4 years.I usually go swimming
(3)every weeks with my parents. Sometimes I go swimming
with my friends after school.

(4)I can swim for 20 minutes without stopping.I am good at
(5)backstroke style.Wearing a swimming cap can make me
(6)swim faster than without wearing a swimming cap .

(7)Swimming is a good exercise. It is good for my health.
(8)moreover, the weather in Hong Kong is suitable for
(9)swimming most of the time. So I can swim throught
(10)the year. I also like watching the swimming event in
(11)the Olympics, and I hope I can become a lifesaver one day.
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