Titanic SBA

Good afternoon ladies and gentlemen. Today I am going to recommend a film that I have recently watched, the Titanic.

It is a love story of a girl from a noble family, Rose and a peasant, Jack.Rose was betrothed to another man, but she fell in love with Jack when they met on the Titanic.Then, Rose was forbidden to see Jack since she was betrothed.The Titanic crashed into an iceberg. Jack died of hypothermia. And Rose was saved. After Rose survived, she changed her last name into Dawson which give the audience a clue that she was Jack's wife.

As I'm very fond of romantic films, I enjoy watching this film very much. When Rose's fiance told Rose that Jack had stolen " the heart ocean", Rose still believed in Jack. Even though Rose did not know him well, she knew that she should trust him and should not leave him in any circumstances. It was great. But , nowadays, how many pairs of lovers can suffer the defeat together? When lovers encounter the difficulties, do they try to solve the problem together ? It is testing them .

That's the end of my presentation. Thank You



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有無朋友仔可以幫我作一作Titanic (SBA),
內容大概係說:男主角是一個低下階層的人士
因一次的幸運而上了鐵達尼號,認識了女主角
而女主角是一個上流社會的千金,已有未婚夫的
因為他們的緣份在郵輪上遇上,亦因為今而深深愛上對方
但郵輪之旅很不幸遇上天氣变壞的意外,令郵輪遇上冰山
令船隻沉沒,男主角不惜所有,冒著生命危險,都要捨命救自己深愛的人
雖然最後得返女主角生環而男主角就死了,但女主角沒有因為自己的愛人死
而放棄自己的生命,反而努力生存下去,今都不往男主角的一份心意

ps:不好用太深既英文詞語,普普通通就可以了
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