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2008-05-23 9:40 pm
I am a fresh graduate of xxxxxx, majoring in xxxx of BBA. Apart from taking business subjects, I also studied about China business characteristics in the courses. I am fluent in Mandarin and proficient in using various computer software to handle documents.

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2008-05-24 12:40 am
✔ 最佳答案
I am a fresh graduate from.........(I think you will add the name of the university and therefore I prefer the word from), major in is better majoring.
various computer softwares
to handle documents (I don't think you need to add this phrase)

參考: My opinion
2008-05-24 6:16 pm
1. 'graduate of xxxx' is correct.
2. software is uncountable. No 's' is required
2008-05-23 10:14 pm
I could not see anything wrong with this text.
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