請問哩句中文如果轉做英文點講呢?

My qin date receives you to send already the hard disk, but is hard
disk size is thick makes me not to use, asked I may not be allowed to
transfer second?

我琴日收到你地寄哩既硬碟,但係個硬碟size厚得制我用唔到,請問我可唔可以轉個第二個?
Yesterday I received the hard disc sent by you. However, the hard disc is over-size that can't be fixed. May I request for a replacement of it?

我琴日收到你地寄哩既硬碟,但係個硬碟size厚得制我用唔到,請問我可唔可以轉個第二個?
I have received the hard disc you sent me yesterday. However, I am not able to use it since it is too thick, can you send me a thinner one which suits me?

I have received the hard disk you posted me yesterday. However I cannot use the hard disk because its size is too large. May I exchange the disk for a thinner one?

2008-05-24 21:38:11 補充：
the 最佳解答 is obviously wrong...how can it be!