English短講 , Help me!! 20點!!

Every year,there are so many people visit foreighn countries.They like visiting Japan, England, France.... It is because they think that there are more attractions such as London Bridge, Effel Tower, Fuji Mount....On the other hands, the climate and weather is better than Hong Kong. It is because the air pollution in Hong Kong is very serious. The tourists do not like visiting Hong Kong because the weather is bad. They cannot see the good view of Hong Kong.
All in all, the government should improve the above problem.